This is my narrative story called Rapunzel and the 7 dwarves it's about a girl called Rapunzel she lives with her stepmum and stepsisters she runs away from home into the forest with her friend Elfrid, she meets a wolf and 7dwarves and ends up going to the ball with the wolf and lives with him and the 7 dwarves . I am proud of my writing because I improved on the hook at the beginning.